Book Review: Overseas by Beatriz Williams

Posted May 29, 2012 by in Book Reviews / 13 Comments

I received this book for free from the publisher in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.

Book Review: Overseas by Beatriz WilliamsOverseas by Beatriz Williams
Published by Putnam on May 10, 2012
Genres: Fiction, Historical Fiction, Romance
Format: Paperback
Pages: 456
Source: the publisher

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When twenty-something Wall Street analyst Kate Wilson attracts the notice of the legendary Julian Laurence at a business meeting, no one's more surprised than she is. Julian's relentless energy and his extraordinary intellect electrify her, but she's baffled by his sudden interest. Why would this handsome British billionaire--Manhattan's most eligible bachelor--pursue a pretty but bookish young banker who hasn't had a boyfriend since college?

The answer is beyond least at first. Kate and Julian's story may have begun not in the moneyed world of twenty-first-century Manhattan but in France during World War I, when a mysterious American woman emerged from the shadows of the Western Front to save the life of Captain Julian Laurence Ashford, a celebrated war poet and infantry officer.

Now, in modern-day New York, Kate and Julian must protect themselves from the secrets of the past, and trust in a true love that transcends time and space.

(from the back cover)

In Overseas, the love story of Kate Wilson and Julian Laurence is told in two threads: one thread takes place in New York City in 2007/2008, and tells the story of Kate and Julian meeting and falling in love; the other thread takes place in France in 1916 during World War I, where Kate has traveled back in time to warn Julian of his imminent demise in battle. The premise of Overseas is a good one, and I like the way the story moves back and forth between the present and Julian’s past; I’m a little geeky, and time travel is always cool. (The way the time travel happened was cool, too, and I wish that part of the story had been more developed.) Also, the kind of love that makes someone want to travel almost 100 years back in time, without hesitation and with no real thought of oneself, to try to save the life of the person one loves, is a wonderful thing. I think Overseas had the potential to be a really good book, but I had a really hard time taking it seriously and I had to wait 350 pages for the story to actually grab me and pull me in.

Note: I think I should take into account that I don’t normally read romance novels because I find the majority of them over-the-top and cheesy. The romance genre just doesn’t seem to be my thing. So maybe I would have the same issues with all romance novels, and what I consider issues are really things that avid romance readers look for in a good romance novel. I don’t know. In other words, I’m not an authority on this particular genre.

I’ve said here before that the dialogue in a book can make all the difference; dialogue can make or break a book for me, and bad dialogue can ruin an otherwise great story. That is what happened with Overseas. I know from personal experience that new love is cheesy; no matter who the two people are, new love brings out the cheesiest in people, including myself. We say and do things we wouldn’t normally say and do, and we don’t feel the least bit embarrassed about it. I think that’s great, and I love it. There is no feeling in the world like the feeling of new love. Unfortunately, I found the dialogue between Kate and Julian to be so over-the-top that I found it unrealistic. I couldn’t picture anyone saying the things Kate said to Julian, and I did a lot of face rubbing and eye rolling. There were quite a few ‘nobody actually talks like this!’ moments.

The characters are off in some ways, too. Kate is portrayed as a pretty self-deprecating, relatively shy woman who never swears and constantly apologizes for things she shouldn’t, but then she says things like, “…it makes me want to have mind-bending all-night sex with you…” and her character is totally shot. I have a hard time picturing someone like Kate (or anyone, for that matter) saying something like this so early on in a relationship. As far as Julian goes, he is for the most part a perfect gentleman. The problem I had with this was that almost every guy Kate comes into contact with aside from Julian is a total sleaze ball. It was as though the author felt that in order for Julian to shine, the rest of the guys in the story had to be horrid. The obvious contrast just didn’t feel realistic to me. If characters are going to shine, they can easily do so on their own merits.

This is Beatriz Williams’ first book and I think maybe she was just trying too hard, which made some parts of the book feel very unnatural. For example, when sitting in an over-sized chair Kate thinks to herself, “…the handsome wing chair in which I was sitting could sallow me whole without a burp.” The ‘without a burp’ is just too much and sounds…weird. I think much of that kind of thing could have been edited out, and it would have made for a much better, tighter book.


The last hundred pages of Overseas are almost completely different. There is no more cheesy dialogue, and the story picks up and becomes a real page-turner. The last quarter of this book actually made all the face rubbing and eye rolling worth it to me, and that is not an exaggeration. If the whole book could have been written like the last hundred pages were, this would have been a really good novel. I cannot stress enough how pleasantly surprised I was. This proved to me that Beatriz Williams has it in her to be a really good author;  she has a pretty good imagination, and with a little more experience and a willingness to tone it down a bit and edit out the superfluous stuff, Williams has the potential to write much better books. I am definitely willing to give her future books a chance.


  • H, thanks for the honest review! Overseas was this month’s featured book for the Chunkster Challenge but I’m glad that I didn’t read it after reading your review. Those same things would have bothered me too.

    • Yeah, she definitely has potential, but this one just had too much over-the-top schmooze in it.

    • Carol

      I can’t get past the first 9 pages. F’n this and F’n that 8 times in 9 pages is just too much. I’m not a prude but I can’t focus on the story when this offensive language seems to be the norm.
      Taking the book back.

      • Are you referring to the way Charlie talks? That’s definitely not the norm for the book, and Charlie doesn’t really play a huge part in it. There is hardly any swearing in the book aside from Charlie’s parts in the dialogue.

      • Wow. Carol, I had no idea. I would probably take it back too.

      • The only thing that really bothered me the few times Charlie talks in the book was how he constantly tried to get Kate to curse like him, too (and he was pretty sexist). He turns out to be a pretty nice guy, though. He has a good side and a bad side just like we all do, I guess.

  • sj

    Not on the phone anymore, so now I can comment!

    I’m sorry you had to wade through 300 pages of meh in order to get to something decent. It is good, though, that she showed potential toward the end. I am a “damnit, I started it I’M FINISHING IT” kind of girl, and it amazes me how many current authors suffer from this same issue.

    • I’m the same way about finishing books I’ve started, with the exception of two. I just couldn’t finish them.

      So yeah, I’m glad I stuck with this one. I’ll be interested to see how her writing styles change in future endeavors.

      • sj

        Ugh, WP is not delivering notifications, so I had no idea you had responded until now.

        Anyway, my abandoned shelf also contains two books, but shhhh, I also have an “on hiatus” shelf or something like that where I put things I’m probably not going to finish, but don’t want there to be hurt feelings.

        I know, I’m horrible. Usually, I force myself to slog my way through it, but sometimes that’s just not possible. 🙁

  • A fair review in my opinion, Heather. I do agree with you that ‘“…it makes me want to have mind-bending all-night sex with you…” is at odds with the character of Kate you described. I thought though, that you would give us some examples of the cheesy over-the-top dialogue between the two.

    I don’t buy into this time travel thing; for me it casts a shadow over actual reality in a novel. It somehow colours the believability of the plot and theme. And from your review, that is one of the issues I may have with the book should I read it. Thank you for sharing.

    • I was going to provide an example or two, but there was just so much that it was hard to choose. I will get the book back out later and provide a couple examples here in the comments.

      As far as the time travel goes, I like it depending on the book. A lot of this book seemed unrealistic to me, so the time travel fit in that context. For me, it depends on the book. I think time travel is a neat concept, but it definitely doesn’t work in just any book.

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